Above is the first draft of our teen angst title sequence / opening scene on Youtube, which is still a long way from being finished and we still have a lot of editing to do. We started the editing process a lot later than everyone else but we are making good progress, so the final draft will be completed on time.
After presenting our first draft to the rest of the class in a media lesson, we received both positive and negative feedback to give us a good idea on what areas need improving and what areas were good.
Positive responses from our film are as followed:
- Good song choice and use of alarm clock sound
- Good use of transitions on the titles
- Clever use of a split screen to represent both personalities
- It's easy to follow (audience easily notices who the main characters are and their social status)
- Good representation of social groups
- No voiceover
- A line should be put in place to split the screens better at the beginning
- It should be shorter (less than 2 minutes)
- Use a more appealing colour and font on the titles
- Include the production company logo and film title
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